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Monday, 2 July 2018

THE SALVATION ARMY.

The salvation is a shop that you can bey blankets,clothing and lots of other stuff.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 July 2018 at 12:06

    Hi Logan,
    I like your post but next time you should check your spelling and also make your writing longer. Add some more details

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  2. Anonymous2 July 2018 at 20:04

    Hi Logan

    I am very proud of the work you have done here. Your first draft was not completed in your own words, but I enjoyed how you fixed it up and I can see your understanding of what the Salvation Army does for our community.

    I also liked that you included the logo to make your writing more interesting.
    Ka pai!
    - Miss Birtch

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